Writing 101, Day 10

Reblogging for Throwback Thursday, and thinking of Grandma June today.

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Today’s Prompt: Tell us something about your favorite childhood meal — the one that was always a treat, that meant “celebration,” or that comforted you and has deep roots in your memory.

So, food.  There wasn’t a real celebration food in my house growing up.  My mom wasn’t a very good cook, and never wanted to be bothered with it, really.  I can’t really think of anything my grandmother made that was particularly memorable, either.

It’s my grandma June that I talk about the most when talking about food.

Grandma June was particular.  Near the end of her life she didn’t eat or drink anything but oranges and diet, caffeine free Pepsi out of a can with a straw.  But the whole time I had her in my life, she always had white tic tacs with her, wherever she was.

She had a little garden in the back yard, and she’d…

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Origami

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It had been a long day at the end of a long week. At the end of a long year, really. And the worst part, Maggie, thought as she pulled herself out of her car, was that it wasn’t half over. Not after a morning in class and an evening spent behind the register at her crappy retail job. It was nine at night, and still her day wasn’t over.

She’d picked up Erica from the sitter’s place, an easily irritated woman who had no inclination of making the toddler dinner. Needless to say Erica was in a mood, and not at all thrilled to be buckled into her car seat. Then there was dinner to make, a bath to be given, and stories to read.

“Time to go to sleep, Baby girl,” she crooned, lifting Erica into her racecar bed.

“No, not tired,” Erica insisted, sitting right back up.

“I wish I wasn’t tired,” Maggie muttered. “Give your mom a break, okay, hun?” Eventually she managed to cajole the child into lying down. Wanting nothing more than to go to bed herself, she went instead to the crowded desk in her living room to start her homework. She took a moment to consider the dinner dishes and the cluttered room before realizing that she would have energy for homework or housework, but not both.

She opened her second hand laptop, and got to work. It was eleven by then. If she worked fast, she might be done by one.

That blissful thought lasted no more than twenty minutes. From Erica’s bedroom came the sound of little feet on the floor, followed by running. “Mommy, I’m too awake!” Erica insisted.

“Okay, okay,” Maggie said, “here’s what we’ll do. You can stay up, but there’s no tv and no stories. You’ve got to sit and play next to me and be real quiet.”

“But what can I do?” Erica asked.

Sighing, Maggie pulled a notebook towards her. She ripped out a page, and started folding it. In a moment, she’s folded the paper into a koi fish. She folded three more pieces, one into a crane, then a frog, then a lotus. “Here,” she said, setting each piece in turn on the ground in front of Erica.

The little girl looked at the pieces, then back up at her mother. “Will you do the secret thing?” she asked, her voice quiet.

How quickly she learned, to be quiet.

Maggie gave her a wicked smile. She gave a flick with her finger, and the pieces began to move. The frog hopped, the ball rolled around in circles, the crane fluttered up into the air and the koi fish popped along as though it were in water. Erica laughed, trying to move one of the pieces on her own. She couldn’t yet, but she was almost there.

With Erica pleasantly distracted, Maggie turned her attention back to her school work. All the magic in the world wasn’t going to get her a degree.

Vanity Presses are all well and good, but…

As you know if you follow me on social media, I’ve spent most of July researching indie publishers to send Broken Patterns to. For the most part, it has been a really great experience. The submission process is similar to that of a literary agent, so it’s not much of a transition. Many places have online submission forms which make my job just that much easier. (Though, word to the wise, most online forms ask for the same info you’d put into a query packet. So, no slacking there.) I’ll be doing an in depth behind the scenes piece about submitting to indie publishers soon.

Not today, though. Today, I have to issue a warning.

In the process of submitting to indie publishers, I came across one that seemed legit. It had an online form that I so love, accepted fantasy novels and seemed to be a legitimate company. I filled everything out with the same amount of care and excitement that I always feel when submitting one of my pieces. It might be the big one, it’s always going be the big one. The one that really gets my name out there and makes me a ‘someone’.

Not so much.

I realized literally minutes after I’d submitted to the company that something was wrong. I received an acceptance letter, a nice long one, right away. The editor asked me to clean up my bio a little and send it back.

Then she informed me that, as indie publishing was a hard business, she asked her writers to purchase at least 50 copies of their book, at a reduced rate of course, to sell myself.

I’m sure you understand what’s happening here. I had not found a legitimate publisher. I’d found a vanity press.

Now, I have nothing against vanity presses. I am self-publishing a series (more on that later this week), and I will probably use something similar to print copies of my book to sell.

But when I do that, I’ll know what I’m getting into.

See, a company like that can do many things that a traditional publisher will do. They might have editors and copywriters. They might have fact checkers. Some even have artists to do cover art for you, or even their own stores. If you’ve decided to independently publish your book there are lots of options and resources out there to help you get that done.

But it’s you that’s getting that done, in that case. You’re investing your money, time and energy. You’re creating a product that you will then yourself, sell. A traditional publisher is a totally different animal. They technically own your book. They pay you, and they ask you to do edits and appearances. The financial pressure is off of you, and so is the selling. You already sold your book to them; they’re going to take it from there.

I like both ways, and intend to pursue both. What I don’t like, is when a vanity press pretends to be a traditional publisher.

I need to know what I’m getting into, and so do you. If I’m responsible for my book then I need to know that, going in.

Fortunately, I have been in this field for a while, and I’ve learned (painfully) that not everyone out there wants to help me publish my book. Some people want to dick me, and other writers, over. Thankfully I never lost money in these lessons, but other writers have. Here, then, are some tips to keep you safe on your publishing journey.

Don’t give anyone money outright.

Literary agents don’t as for money from the writer. Neither do traditional publishers. Self-publishing companies do, but that’s to be understood, and you’ve got a clear contract dictating what you’re getting for your money. Any agent or publisher that charges ‘reading fees’ or ‘office fees’ is not a legitimate company. Those are not things that are charged in this business, end of story.

Don’t believe someone who tells you that you must purchase a certain amount of books yourself.

Again, traditional publishers exist to sell your book to readers. They don’t want to make money off of you. They want you to make books that they can then make money off of. No valid traditional publisher wants you to buy copies, and in fact will possibly send you a few copies for free.

Always check Predators and Editors.

I have this page bookmarked, and you should to. Not only can you find the dirt on bad ‘editors’, you can report companies that you’ve found that are doing writers wrong. (Don’t worry, not every little gripe and burn is up here.)

Be safe out there, whatever road to publishing you take.

Reading Young Adult Fiction

Hi, my name is Nicole. I’m thirty years old and I routinely read young adult fiction. This is not a confession, I’m just telling you something that I do, that you should think about doing too.

Now, to be fair, I do write young adult and new adult fiction. I don’t write adult fiction for a reason. So, yeah, I’m biased. But I didn’t make this decision out of nowhere, you know. I did this because I love young adult and new adult fiction, and I’m not the only one. Hunger Games, Divergent, 5th Wave, these are all popular series that have now been made into major movies. Grown ass adults are reading these books, and it’s not like Harry Potter that came out when we were kids and just finished up when we were adults. I understand entirely why this is happening, and here’s why.

Therapy.

This one only applies to books I’ve already read, especially if I read it as a child. It’s soothing to read a story I know, revisit fantastic worlds and reread favorite lines and paragraphs. For example, I reread The Giver every year on my birthday. It’s short, I can easily finish it in a day.

I highly advise, if you’re going through a stressful time, try rereading a book you loved as a child. I personally love Harry Potter, of course. I also reread Chronicles of Narnia and all of the Beverly Cleary stories. That’s one of the best things about having kids, actually. I have an excuse to reread The Mouse and The Motorcycle.

Great stories.

Young adult stories are the best! The adventure, the character development, the side plots! Never does a character learn and become a better person more than in a young adult book. I’ll use Edmond as an example, from Chronicles of Narnia. It’s not the best example, because it’s a little heavy handed. But it’s the earliest example in my life when I started out hating a character at the start of book one, and by book three (Voyage of the Dawn Treader) he was my absolute favorite person.

Complex moral issues that adult writers don’t seem to fuss with.

I don’t know why this is even a thing, but young adult stories seem to tackle important things that I think need talked about more than adult books. Maybe it’s because writers think adults are already set in their ways of thinking while young adults can still be manipulated. But I still want to read things like that. I wish we could see a little more of that in adult fiction, honestly.

Not as much sex.

Not that I’m against sex! I like it, and I’m not about to porn shame. But when I’m reading, I don’t want to read graphic sex scenes unless I bought a book specifically for that. If I got a fantasy book, I want dragons and swords and magic, not detailed sex. And I don’t know why, maybe I just have bad luck, but I have never read an adult book (except cozy mysteries) that didn’t have sex scenes. And I read a lot. Horror, fantasy, science fiction, historical fiction. Why does everything have to have sex? At least, in young adult work the sex is inferred, not explicit.

Fun characters.

Again, I don’t know why this should be so, but young adult book characters are more fun. Yes, some of the Game of Thrones characters are awesome, but as most of them are dead by now that doesn’t much matter now, does it?

My best example for this one is Tris from Divergent. She is a fun character to read about. She’s not a great person, sometimes she’s downright selfish. She’s not the brightest person, really slow at picking up on hints. But she’s a fun person to read about.

I hope you take two things away from this. If you’re looking for a new book, you might consider young or new adult. If you’re a writer, like me, you might consider writing like this, no matter what age range you’re writing for. Just saying.

Scratching

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Scratching

Reese took a minute after the students left and before the janitor showed up to clean the mess to take a few deep breaths. He knew things were different in the city than where he’d grown up. He knew kids were wilder here, had expected that when he’d taken the job.

What he hadn’t expected was one of these idiot kids jumping on his desk in a fit of extra energy. The desk, which had probably been bought in a fire sale, had not been up to the weight of a teenage boy.

“Mr. Byron,” Principal Price said, coming into the room. She took a look at the desk, and her mouth turned up in a badly hidden laugh. Of course, this was funny for her. After all, it had happened to the snooty country boy after all. “How are you?”

“Fine, frustrated, confused,” Reese said, “How’s Frankie?”

“He got t the hospital okay. Looks like he’s broken a few bones, but he’ll mend. Any idea what caused this?”

“None at all,” he replied, “I hope I’m not in trouble, here.”

“No, of course not,” Price said, “We’re just going to have to replace your desk with one from the basement for now, until we can get you a new one.”

Great, a basement desk. The only desks in the basement were the left overs from when the old school building had been torn down some thirty years ago. The desk he’d had was shitty, this one was likely to be old and shitty. He’d be surprised if it held up his lesson planner.

The next day when he reached his classroom, his new desk was already in place. It was a monstrosity, nearly twice the size of his old one. Certainly larger than the small classroom had space for. It was made with dark brown wood, covered in deep scratches. Every single drawer stuck as he tried to move his things into it.

Muttering darkly to himself, Reese dropped his planner on the desk top. He knew it would do no good to complain, and even less good than that to expect a new desk any time soon.

From somewhere in the desk came the sound of scratching. Reese halted his pen, and listened. Was there a damn mouse in there?

The sound faded. Students started to file in, making it impossible for him to seek out the source of the sound.

Reese took attendance, and closed his book. The scratches under it caught his eye. What had been nonsensical marks before now spelled out two words. Watch Alice.

He touched the scratches. He was sure they hadn’t been there before.

He glanced up at one of his students, a girl named Alice. It had to be a coincidence, Alice was a fairly common name. She sat at the very back of the class, her face down in her composition book. Reese wasn’t sure he’d ever heard her speak before.

He shook his head, and got to his feet. “Alright, folks, let’s get our homework passed up.”

The class did so. Some looked guilty, some looked calm. Two or three didn’t bother pulling anything out, having not completed the assignment. Alice, who he couldn’t help but glancing back to, fished her work out and handed it to the girl named Abigale in front of her.

“What the hell are you looking at, bitch?” Abigale said suddenly.

“W-what?” Alice stammered.

“Abigale,” Reese said, “we don’t talk like that in this classroom.”

“But shes back here staring at my face like it’s messed up!” Abigale said.

“No I wasn’t,” Alice said, “I just looked up at you when I handed you my-,”

“You don’t need to be looking at me!” Abigale cried. She got to her feet, reaching for the other girl. She’d managed to put three long scratch marks across her face before Reese could reach them. The rest of the class responded in a predictable way, jeering and egging the girls into a fight.

When Alice had been taking to the nurse and Abigale to the principal’s office, Reese flopped back into his chair. It would be hell to get the class back on track, but he had to try. What had been wrong with Abigale? “Alright, books open to page 217, we’ll be starting on a new story today.”

The class grumbled. Clearly, they didn’t think they could be bothered with such things as reading after the show.

Frustrated, Reese picked up his planner. That’s when he discovered that the words, Watch Alice, were gone.

Weeks came and went. Abigale came back to class, apparently seeing a new therapist after her step mother abruptly stopped coming to pta meetings, and was a much calmer student. Reese had just about managed to forget the whole thing when he came into his classroom one morning to find new scratches on the top of his desk. Keys on the hood, it said.

“I don’t think I’m getting enough sleep,” he muttered, hanging up his jacket.

He’d been dreading the third class of the day, because of a student named Marshal. He was hoping that Marshal wouldn’t take the time to look at the grade on his most recent essay until he was well away from Reese’s classroom. To that end, Reese waited until the students were leaving to hand them back.

His plan failed.

Marshal stood right at his desk, and flipped through the pages of his work. On the front page was a red D.

“Mr. Byron, I don’t understand this grade,” he said.

“That’s why I give the essays back to you, so that you can go over it at your leisure and see what you can learn from it. That’s all a bad grade is, Marshal, a change to learn.”

“I’ve never gotten such a bad grade on something,” Marshal said. Some of his fellow students were chuckling as they left.

“I was surprised too,” Reese said, “But I can’t let poor work slide just because of good work in the past.”

“Well, can I rewrite it?” the boy asked.

“No, I’m sorry,” Reese said, “I don’t accept do overs. This isn’t a new policy, I told you that at the start of the year.”

“But I can’t have this grade!”

“And I can’t have you raising your voice in my classroom,” Reese said, “Now get to your next class, please. Do better next time.”

Marshal stormed out, though students coming in for the next class. Reese went back to his work, but his hands were shaking.

That afternoon, he made a point of dawdling so that he could walk out of the school with Principal Price. “Any progress on getting me a new desk?” he asked.

“What?” Price asked, “Oh, that’s right. No, we haven’t had a chance to take care of that, yet. Hopefully when we get the budget for the next semester.”

“The next semester?” Reese asked, “But it’s only October now.”

“I’m sorry, but we can’t just make money show up where it’s not,” Price said.

They’d reached Reese’s car. Price caught sight of it first, and stopped. “Oh, hell,” she said.

Reese looked at his car. Someone had scratched the word Fucker on the hood.

“That little bastard!” Reese cried, “Principal Price, I know this was Marshal Clinton. I gave him a bad grade on his essay, and he decided to take it out on me like this.”

“You don’t know that,” Price said, “Not for sure, anyway. We’ll investigate this, I promise you. Come talk to me about it tomorrow, okay?”

And she patted him on the shoulder and headed to her own car. Reese got into his, thinking darkly to himself that even if they did prove Marshal had done this, it wouldn’t help him pay for a new hood.

Much to Reese’s relief, things were quite again for a time. No outbursts from the students and no scratching from his desk. In fact, snow was falling on the city before, staying late one night to grade papers and give the salt trucks a chance for one more pass, he heard the scratching again.

He picked his papers up. On the desktop, again, were the words Watch Alice. After two correct predictions, he was determined to take this one seriously.

The problem was that there wasn’t much to watch Alice do. She didn’t talk if she didn’t have to, not to teachers or her fellow students. He checked with her other teachers, who all reported the same. Alice kept to herself and her school work. No reason for concern, especially when there were so many kids in the school who were in real trouble.

He watched her anyway, because the scratching didn’t go away.

The day before holiday break came. Reese was sure that he was more relieved than any of the students. He was looking forward to two weeks off, knowing that Alice would be safely home with her parents. That and the hope of a new budget and a new desk in January meant that the day couldn’t go by fast enough.

At the end of his first class, he took one last opportunity to keep an eye on Alice. He shut his book, just in time to see that the words had changed. Too late, it said now.

Alice was usually the last to leave, tending to avoid the scuffle at the door. That day, though, she hurried to the front, leaving her book bag at her desk.

Reese got to his feet, starting towards her. “Alice,” he said, “is everything okay?”

She didn’t respond. Instead, she pulled a pistol from her hoodie pocket. She fired twice before Reese could grab her, hitting Abigale in the head and another girl in the chest. When Reese got his hand on her, she fired at him, hitting him squarely in the chest. She took three more shots before putting the gun against her own head.

Reese stumbled back, falling onto his desk. He could still hear screaming, but the words were no longer making sense.

The words, too late, were gone, but the scratching sound was back. As he watched, the word Welcome appeared.

2016, So Far, So Good

I feel like I’m always behind, I swear. I intended to do a yearly goals update early in July and here it is, August and I’m just now getting around to it. Oh well, life happens. I think that might be the title of my auto biography, honestly.

Anyway, July is a crucial point in the year. It’s the magic halfway mark, and a good time to stop for a few hours, review what you’ve done so far, and make a plan to make the rest of your goals happen in the next six months. It’s also a great time to realize that one might have been a little drunk when they made their goals for the year, and it might need to be pruned the hell back. Marketing Creatively had such a great article about a mid year review. You should check it out and do a review of your own.

So, in the spirit of honesty, here’s where I am for the year. I started out sharing three big goals with you guys.

  • Make actionable content.
  • Write awesome stuff.
  • Make money writing.

So, I kind of scrapped the first one, as I started writing more personal essays and complaining about politics instead. I think I’m going more toward the second goal, of writing awesome stuff.

Now, awesome is a relative term, obviously, but I have been producing a ton of new short fiction, which I’m pretty psyched about. I wanted to write eight new short stories this year, and I’ve done that. I’ll actually be increasing that goal, since I want to publish new short fiction every week.

I’ve finished the second draft of Starting Chains. I’m almost done with the rough draft of Missing Stitches. I am about to start the third draft of the secret project. (I know, I’ve been talking about this since January without actually talking about it. It’s coming soon, I haven’t forgotten!)

Sadly, though, I have made no money writing. If we’re going to use that as a measure of my great indie writing experiment, it’s been a failure so far. No one has paid me for my writing.

But a lot of people have read it. A lot of people have read my stories, shared my stories and liked my stories. I’ve had the opportunity to give away several copies of Days, and that made me pretty happy.

So, I’m doing okay. I wish I were farther along, but I’m not, And I’m not going to waste a second being pissed at myself about that. It takes time away from getting shit done, playing with my kids and shopping for makeup. Here, then, is my list of remaining goals for the last six months of 2016. They’re a little more specific, because at this point they need to be.

  • I want to finish and launch the secret project. I’m estimating that this should be happening in late September, early October.
  • I want to finish the rough draft of Missing Stitches. This is going to be kind of bitter sweet, since it’s the last book of the trilogy, and when it’s done I’m putting these characters away for a while. So while I’ll still be editing for a year, I won’t have any new stories from them.
  • I want to completely finish Starting Chains, the second book in the series.
  • I want to at least make a start on the second draft of Missing Stitches. This is always the longest part of a novel for me, because I’m basically ripping up the first draft and starting over again now that I know what doesn’t work. Also, it takes me forever to type it.
  • Finally, I want to keep writing flash and short fiction to post here on PBW every week.

Now then if you haven’t done so already, you should take some time to do a mid-year review. I’d advise starting with the Marketing Creatively review, but I’d advise a further step. I have a series of steadfast rules that I apply to making goals. I would highly suggest, for your own wellbeing, that you give them a try.

  1. Plan for days off. Start with your birthday and the birthdays of those you love most (for me that’s the monsters and the darling husband.) Then factor in holidays that are going to take up your time. Then any vacations you’re planning. Finally, I plan a day off a month if none of the other things apply.
  2. Don’t make goals based on things that are out of your control. This is something I still find myself doing, and I had to go through and kill a lot of goals I made at the start of the year because of that. I don’t make goals, for instance, that involve getting a certain amount of readers. Or selling a certain amount of books. Those things are entirely out of my control. What is in my control is how good my writing is. How good was my advertising? Did I send it to enough book reviewers, the right book reviewers? Did I get the word out effectively? Did I make it easy to find and buy my book? Those are things that I have control over, and those are things that I make goals concerning.
  3. Finally, make two lists. The first one should be a realistic list, that takes into consideration your time constraints. This is the totally attainable list. You can break this down by the month, the week and the day, and you know you can achieve these goals.

Now double it. Make a list of everything you really want to do this year. Make the list of things that, if you were done with them by the end of the year, you’d be over the moon excited about. If you had all the time in the world, no other responsibilities and everything went your way.

You’re going to blow through your first list, and you probably won’t finish your second one. At least, that’s what I do every time. I still need both lists, though, because if I only had the first one, I’d not get as much awesomeness accomplished. If I only had the second list, I’d get discouraged. That’s why I have two lists.

How are you going on your goals for the year? Anything awesome that you want to brag on? Let us know in the comments below.

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