Starting Chains, Chapter Two

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If you missed last week, I shared the first chapter of Starting Chains. Now, here is Chapter Two.

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Sultiana tilted her head back to feel the sun on her bare face. It was the first time she’d felt it without her veil since she’d come of age. She exulted in knowing that she would never wear one again.

She looked down from the sky, and smiled at the scene before her. She stood in the tile covered courtyard in front of the palace of Calistar, her home. Great clay basins overflowing with desert flowers spotted the area. The tiles and fountain were covered in a thick carpet of cherry blossoms, sent as a gift from Queen Shori of Coveline.

Her Father, King Omar, stood in front of the fountain. He was a huge man with a bald head and a neatly trimmed beard. Like all royalty in…

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The best characters who look human (but aren’t)

Spoiler warning for Strange the Dreamer!

Some of my favorite characters in fantasy and science fiction are the ones that appear human. Characters that you might pass on the street without another thought. The ones that look just like all the other people. But they’re not.

For this list, I’ve included eight of my favorite not human characters from tv and books. It’s weird, I don’t think I’ve written a single character like this. Guess I’ll have to fix.

Monroe from Grimm

Monroe is a blutbad (think werewolf). But he would hate to be pigeonholed into that. He’s also a indexclockmaker, a historian, and a great guy all around. He’s also vegetarian because he’s decided he doesn’t want to be a hunter and killer anymore.

I love that about him. Not because I have any trouble with eating meat. I really love meat, actually. But it’s part of what makes Monroe a perfect blend of modern and traditional. He’s his own whole person and being a blutbad is just part of the bigger picture.

Wolf from 10th Kingdom

Kind of the polar opposite of Monroe, Wolf is a big bad wolf, and he remains a big bad wolf right up until the end.

That isn’t to say that his character doesn’t evolve and change as the book goes on. He falls in love with the main character, Virginia, and wants to be a better person because of that. Through the course of the story, they find instead that they’re compromising on what a better person looks like for both of them.

If I just went a little into new age philosophy, that wasn’t by accident. At some point early in the book, Wolf meets a psychologist, who recommends a series of books to help him. He proceeds to cart an armful of self-help books through the nine kingdoms while on their quests.

The entire Other cast from Coraline

I love how these characters could have been just props. But it’s just not Gaiman’s style to do anything by halves. So the Other characters are mirrors of their real-world examples, but better. They all seem to be exactly what a little girl Coraline’s age would want; completely focused on her. That age is a selfish age, no judgments.

Later, the Others become mirrors of their real-world examples, but worse. So, so much worse. They become what we warn children strangers might become, monsters bent on hurting little children.

The True Knot from Doctor Sleep

Much like the Other’s from Coraline, the True Knot preys on children. That’s enough to put them at the top of a nightmare list. But the really scary thing about them, that is made clear through the book, is that you could walk right past these people, and probably have, and never know they were there.

They look like RV people. Boring people, retirees, and free spirits. People wouldn’t look at twice. Unless you happen to be a child with the shining. Then you’ll see more of them than you want.

Lazlo from Strange the Dreamer

I have to admit, I kind of didn’t see this ending coming. I just figured he was from Weep and didn’t remember. But it goes so much deeper than that.

I love that he was just this amazing, mythical figure, and he didn’t know it. He’s just going about his business, as a librarian in love with Weep, until he meets Sarai.

I love that even though he has the physical build of a bruiser, he’s a sensitive and genuinely kind man. I love that the other characters are just baffled that he helps people without expecting anything in return.

blog pic 2The Doctor from Doctor Who

Another great character, who is great because of his goodness. The Doctor doesn’t carry a gun, he carries a screwdriver to fix instead of destroying. He has two hearts, and it shows, in the genuine care he feels for every single creature in the universe. He will live forever, and he feels the honest and painful weight of that.

But he never, no matter how much it hurts, stops caring about people. Can you imagine the weight of that? How many people he’s lost, how many worlds he’s seen the end of. And he keeps seeking out companions, keeps seeking out love. Even though he knows how it will end, he keeps on loving.

Doyle from Angel

I was a kid the first time I saw Angel, and I had no experience with a main freaking character being just blog pickilled off in the first season. So, when Doyle died (The good fight, yeah?) I wept. Literally, my eyes stung when I typed that.

Doyle was half demon, half human. Most of the time he looked like a normal person, and he acted like he was running from something dark in his past. We don’t really ever find out what darkness he was running from, but it’s there.

Doyle is funny. He’s a screwup, and he’s not much of a fighter at first. But he has a calling, to help Angel save people, and he commits himself to that. He becomes brave, and he gives his life to save people who would likely kill him if they knew who he was. There’s a nobility there, and I don’t know many people equal to it. (Side note, characters like him are why I love Joss Whedon so very, very much.)

So that’s it. What do you think? Did I miss a character you think should have been on the list? Let us know in the comments below.

The city of Septa has barely had a moment of peace since the death of their king, missing stitches-001Michael. Lenore, the princess, and heir, hopes that she and her husband, Victor, can bring some stability. Meanwhile, her brother Devon and his wife, Queen Sultiana, come to visit and meet Lenore and Victor’s twin daughters. Sultiana comes with a heavy heart, having just miscarried her own child, and lost her father.

Instead, Lenore finds herself battling against her uncle, Joseph, over her right to the throne. As he stirs the city into civil war, an ancient enemy reveals itself. Brother Brennan, who claims to speak for The Creator, is killing Septa citizens in the streets.

Then, Lenore’s daughters are kidnapped. While Victor and Devon hunt the city in search of the princesses, Lenore and Sultiana must lead her city in a war against her uncle, and a twisted holy man. The canals run red as Lenore fights for her city, her family, and the safety of the world, in the conclusion of Woven.

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Starting Chains, Chapter One

Reposting Chapter one of Starting Chains, with some gorgeous art done by a buddy of mine.

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Today, just for my PBW followers, I’m presenting the prolouge and first chapter of Starting Chains. I hope you enjoy it.

Prologue

You think you know anger, you silly thing. You think you understand fury, betrayal. It’s hilarious when you little nothings think you have an understanding of those emotions.

Your hero failed you, didn’t he? The Great Calvin, who everyone thought would be the champion for the common man. They all fail, after a while. Heroes are just people, after all, and people fail. Certainly, your hero failed me. The greatest fault of the males of your species is always your obsession with the females.

But it is not as though he was important. Not so important that he cannot be replaced by a hundred others. After all, you’re hearing me now.

Your new hero will arrive soon, and he will fail you, too. The difference is, this…

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Broken Patterns Preview, Part Three

The whole trilogy is now available.

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Chapter Two

Devon Mestonie had lived in the palace of his uncle the king for most of his life. His father had a castle and lands of his own, of course. But in all of his fourteen years Devon didn’t think he’d spent more than a handful of months there. His papa said it was because there was a lot of work to do in the capital, and he was needed. His mamma, Lorna, said it was because Samuel and Issac were too close to stand being parted for very long.

In all that time, Devon and his brother Octavian had shared a room in their cousin Michael’s suite of rooms, as royal cousins and first in his court. Now, Octavian was being moved into Michael’s room. But he wasn’t going without making noise.

“Michael’s been dead for only two weeks…

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Creating enjoyable magical structures

Obviously, I love the fantasy genre, both reading and writing it. If you’ve been in this site for more than a few seconds that should be painfully clear to all of you. I’ve written four fantasy novels, working on a fifth one now. And I’ve read, well, countless fantasy novels. I have to assume that if you’re here, you also love fantasy books.

There are countless reasons why the fantasy genre is great. Mythical creatures are awesome, especially dragons. Fantasy settings are great, and so are stories about swords and knights.

By far, though, my favorite thing about the fantasy genre is the magic.

Magic is just so cool! When done right, that is. Because there are sure as hell a lot of bad magical structures. But what makes a magical structure great? I have some opinions, of course.

A good fantasy structure is rooted in reality. I know, that sounds counterproductive, but let me explain. Reality is based on some rules that we all agree in. We all understand, even if we don’t know the specifics, that thread is made my spinning fiber into long strands. Magic that’s not structured in a similar way tends to flutter off the rails without any real bounds. This is a sort of lazy writing. What tension can there be if magic has no bounds and a mage can just snap her fingers and fix everything?

It’s also based in science, sort of. As I learn more and more about science, I understand how these two genres are blended together. Science can seem like magic or at least a step away.

Of course, a magic structure needs to be big enough to save the world. Especially if it’s in the hands of your main character. It needs to be big and bold enough to defeat the bad girl, save the prince, create the happy ending that we need.

But magic is also great when it’s capable of improving everyday lives. When reading a fantasy book, I want to be charmed by the mage who cooks with their magic. Who catches the pickpocket, uses a potion in a mason jar to keep rats out of his kitchen, who has a talisman to keep out prowlers.

Finally, the best thing to do with magic is to base it in steadfast rules, that are broken at the right time. Think of Avatar, the last Airbender, when Katara starts blood bending. Or when Toph starts metal bending. These were understandable barriers that made sense to break.

So what do you think about magical structures? What’s your favorite example? Let us know in the comments below.

Broken Patterns Preview, Part Two

By the way, the whole trilogy is now available on Amazon.

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Chapter One

Lenore Mestonie pulled her little brother, Devon, close to her. She tried to catch her breath. The boy who’d saved them scrambled to his feet, and ran towards the canal. She wanted to scream for him to come back, that there were other soldiers who might still hurt them, and she still couldn’t even see her brother Octavian, but then she realized how foolish that was. She didn’t even know this boy, after all.

Devon was struggling out of her grasp. “Michael was hurt, Lenore,” he cried. “We’ve got to check on him.”

“What are we going to do, stupid?” Lenore snapped. “Just stay here with me until we see Papa.”

Septa soldiers were running through the garden, trying to round up the Montelarians. Lenore saw some of them get away, and she hoped that they all drowned in the canals like their leader.

Samuel, her father, was…

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Sylvermoon Chronicles launches today!

Hey guys. I just wanted to jump in here fast to tell you that Sylvermoon Chronicles, an anthology from me and some other amazing authors, came out today. It’s all the things I love, fantasy, science fiction and horror. I just picked up my copy, and I can’t wait to dig into it.

Of course I know you’re going to love my horror piece, The Trouble Door. But all the other stories are awesome too.

Here’s a link.

And happy Valentines Day.

Broken Patterns, Chapter One

Reblogging for anyone who hasn’t read it yet. Who’s pumped for book three?

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So, Broken Patterns is coming out on Friday. So, I wanted to give all of my PBW readers a sneak preview. Here, then, is Chapter One. I’ll be posting Chapter Two on Wednesday and Chapter Three on Friday. Hope you like it.

Part One

Prologue

I have been so alone for so long. Since the other one had cheated me, leaving me in the darkness and cold, I have been alone. I had tried to find another place to bear my egg, my child, but there are precious few warm places in the darkness of the universe. There was nothing I could do, but hold it close to me as it died.

The other one’s child has flourished. Upon it, thousands of species had grown, warm and safe in the light of the sun. The sun that should have been mine.

I can bear this no longer.

Calvin Olendae didn’t…

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My Missing Stitches mixed tape

This was a brainstorming project I did a while ago, and it was a lot of fun. So, I decided to share the results with you today.

I don’t really worry much about major themes when I’m writing a book. At least not for the first few drafts. Those come later, and they’re never anything I plan. Once I see them, usually in the third draft, I do my best to bring them out. But the best themes come organically.

For Missing Stitches, several strong themes came out. Sacrifice was a major one, as were relationships between brothers. The biggest theme, at least the biggest one I saw, was refusing to bend or break. Through the whole story, Lenore is told over and over that she can’t break. I didn’t even realize the number of characters who were telling her not to break until I went through and re-read it.

To help myself get into the mood to really bring these themes to life, I made a playlist of songs that inspired those feelings within me. And it turned into a pretty fun playlist. So I wanted to share it with all of you today.

God’s Gonna Cut You Down, Jonny Cash

Ready Aim Fire by Imagine Dragons

Shut the world away by Breaking Benjamin

When we die, bowling for soup

Landslide, by Stevie Knicks

Till I Collapse, Eminem

Hero, Skillet

Ten Thousand Fists, Disturbed

If you want, you can actually listen to the whole playlist right now on Youtube.

If you’re a writer, have you ever made a playlist for one of your books? Is there a song that makes you think of a specific book? Please share with us in the comments below.

The city of Septa has barely had a moment of peace since the death of their king, missing stitches-001Michael. Lenore, the princess, and heir, hopes that she and her husband, Victor, can bring some stability. Meanwhile, her brother Devon and his wife, Queen Sultiana, come to visit and meet Lenore and Victor’s twin daughters. Sultiana comes with a heavy heart, having just miscarried her own child, and lost her father.

Instead, Lenore finds herself battling against her uncle, Joseph, over her right to the throne. As he stirs the city into civil war, an ancient enemy reveals itself. Brother Brennan, who claims to speak for The Creator, is killing Septa citizens in the streets.

Then, Lenore’s daughters are kidnapped. While Victor and Devon hunt the city in search of the princesses, Lenore and Sultiana must lead her city in a war against her uncle, and a twisted holy man. The canals run red as Lenore fights for her city, her family, and the safety of the world, in the conclusion of Woven.

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The best fantasy creatures part three

I did part one and part two of this little series last month. Like most things I write these days, it grew. It was supposed to just be one blog post, and it grew into two. Then, I made the mistake of telling my husband what I was writing.

His response; how could you write an entire two blog posts like that and not include this other list of characters?

So, I felt obliged to share some more fantasy creatures with you all. If you missed part one or part two, you can check them out here.

Now, onto part three.

The Tardis from Doctor Who

She’s more than just a ship, and she’s probably the best relationship that The Doctor has ever had. She’s got a serious attitude and decides whether someone is trustworthy or not in a moment. And she’s never wrong.

Of course, there was the one episode that she took on human form. And she was crazy, charming, and everything you’d expect a constant companion of a crazy Timelord.

Boo from Baldur’s Gate

Full disclosure, I don’t like hamsters. But I do like Boo because he’s not a normal hamster. He’s a miniature giant space hamster. Through the game, he squeaks when you try to pick him up, and he goes for the eyes in battle. He’s a constant loving companion to his master, Minsc.

Hoppy Wheel of Time

Hoppy is one of many wolves befriended by the character Perrin as his abilities with wolves increases. He’s a happy, laughing animal that continues to be a bright spot through the whole series.

What struck me the most about this character was that he didn’t exhibit the sort of loyalty you’d expect from a dog. That’s the blind, unshakable devotion of an animal that thinks you are the world. A wolf, much like a cat, does not see you as their master. They are equal, at best. And there is a mutual respect there.

That’s the relationship between Hoppy and Perrin. This is not a pet, this is an ally on four paws. And a great one.

The loyal bowtruckle from Fantastic Beasts

This creature made me cry. It loves Newt so freaking much that I had to include it even though I already included a Harry Potter creature. This bowtruckle loved Newt and wanted to hang out with him all the time. And because of that, for such a good cause but such a terrible price, Newt almost trades him away. But this little scrapper gets right back to him, and no hard feelings. He just loves him, unconditionally. And Newt loves him, right back.

But now I want to hear from you. Did I still miss some fantastic fantasy creatures? Let us know in the comments below.

The city of Septa has barely had a moment of peace since the death of their king, missing stitches-001Michael. Lenore, the princess, and heir, hopes that she and her husband, Victor, can bring some stability. Meanwhile, her brother Devon and his wife, Queen Sultiana, come to visit and meet Lenore and Victor’s twin daughters. Sultiana comes with a heavy heart, having just miscarried her own child, and lost her father.

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